写作技巧第五篇: 学术组写作task 1

IELTS 雅思学术写作高分技巧

1. 最少150个字，如果少于这个字数，你将会被扣分。
2. 这部分的要点是要描述资料或是程序。不要给与意见，假设或是解决方法。
3. 使用的语言，应该是学术性，且正式的英语。
4. 在这一部分的作答上，不要超过20分钟

IELTS雅思学术写作task 1的结构应该如下:

一个简短的介绍 (一句或两句话) 带出所描述的资料的概观 – 也就是说，大略提到主题，以及资料呈现的方式为何。不要把标题原封不动地抄下来，你应该要用自己的文字来陈述。 主文，包含:

1. 点出提供的资料/程序里最显著的资讯；主要相似处，不同处，大致的趋势。不需要描述所有的资讯。
2. 从资料中找出一些论证/数据来支持你所陈述的事实。不需要提到所有的资料。 一个小结论 (一句或两句话) ，以总结主要的趋势或是重要的特征。

快速地找出资讯以及概述资料

在IELTS雅思考试里，为了符合写作的要求，要在有限的字数中描述很多的资料，因此选择适当的内容与有效的方法组织资讯是很重要的。为了在有限的时间内完成，必须要增进运用语言、与从图表中找出所需资讯的速度。

The bar chart below shows the results of a survey to find out why Chinese and Indian university students want to learn English at university. The survey had 10,000 participants.

Reasons for Learning English

详读这个图表，然后尽可能正确地回答问题。

1.这个长条图告诉你什么?

2.这个长条图整体上告诉你什么?
有多少人参与这个问卷调查? 参与者来自哪里?

3.哪一个团体比较积极学习英语?

4. 在比较积极的团体里，哪些是主要学习英语的理由? 哪些资料(百分比) 支持以上(理由)说法?

5. 在比较不积极的团体里，哪些是主要学习英语的理由? 哪些资料(百分比) 支持以上(理由)说法?

6.在比较不积极的团体里，哪些是较不热门的学习理由? 哪些资料(百分比) 支持以上(理由)说法?

7.在比较积极的团体里，哪些是较不热门的学习理由? 哪些资料(百分比) 支持以上(理由)说法?

答案

1.The bar chart shows the results of a survey.

2.10,000 people were interviewed. The participants were Chinese and Indian university students.

3.Overall the Chinese students were more positive

4.The most popular reasons amongst the Chinese students for learning English were that it was useful for work and could improve job prospects. In addition it was thought to be enjoyable and useful for travel. Around 90% of the students interviewed gave these reasons.

5.The most popular reasons amongst the Indian students for learning English were that it was useful for work and could improve job prospects. In addition it was thought to be useful for travel. Around 50 - 60% of the students interviewed gave these reasons.

6.The least popular reasons amongst the Indian students for learning English were that it is important for studying and enjoyable. These statistics were all around 20 -30%. The least popular reasons amongst the Chinese students for learning English were that it improves their own language, is important for studying and improves personal development. Around 70% of the students interviewed gave these reasons.

7.The least popular reasons amongst the Chinese students for learning English were that it improves their own language, is important for studying and improves personal development. Around 70% of the students interviewed gave these reasons.

现在，把你答案的句子结合起来，变成一篇连续的文字。

Model Answer

The bar chart shows the results of a survey in which 10,000 Chinese and Indian universities were interviewed

Overall the Chinese students were more positive with the most popular reasons for learning English being that it was useful for work and could improve job prospects. In addition it was thought to be enjoyable and useful for travel with around 90% of the students interviewed giving these reasons. Similarly, the most popular reasons amongst the Indian students for learning English were its' usefulness for work and travel, and its ability to improve job prospects with slightly over half the participants giving these reasons. Interestingly among the Indian students, enjoyment was not something that was thought to be an important factor nor its importance for studying with around a fifth stating these preferences. Conversely, 70% of the Chinese students thought learning English was is important for studying and that it improves their own language as well as their personal development.

In general the graph shows that Chinese students are more positive about learning English than Indian students.

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